It's been awhile since I decided to write again. I'm hoping to get some momentum and some initiative to finish this story. I'm sharing this in hope that someone would tell me that I should finish this. Not sure, but knowing someone is waiting for the story to continue helps me get into momentum and start finishing the story.
Kinda long, but again, I hope that someone would help me get my momentum or groove back. Also, forgive me but I'm no pro when it comes to writing so I just write what I feel appropriate for the scene. Criticism and Corrections are highly appreciated.
Lucian
was glancing once again at the open window in his office. The cold winter chill
passes thru the window and blew on his pale white face. The dark night skies
outside convey a rainstorm and yet it is already December. Rain at this season
can only be a one-time seasonal mistake. Yet for Lucian, it bodes a coming
change. His long legs, covered by a pair of black slacks, were perched above
the table while he sat on the comfortable chair, looking at the bright lights
outside the window as they shine inside the office. The lights inside his
office are completely off which gives him a better view of the outside. Lucian
always preferred the dark with a few lights coming from the outside. He can
hear the noises of people and cars; passing in and out; as the rush of
Christmas shopping raged on. Last minute gifts, last minute announcements, last
minute for everyone to buy gifts. Lucian preferred to stay inside and enjoy the
coziness of his office. Diane, his gothic secretary who’s an oddball at times,
had gone out with Karl, his would-be assistant, apparently on a date. It was
something Lucian orchestrated to have the night alone in his office. His deep,
crystal blue eyes reflected the Christmas lights shining outside. There was
once a time he had the holiday spirit, enjoying the hustle and bustle of Christmas
and yet now, he glazes at it with an empty feeling. Again, the cold winter wind
blew into his office and brushed his silver hair back as if it were hands
patting him on the head. He could hear the wind, as if whispering. He closed
his eyes, leaned back further into the chair, hands on his head. He took a deep
breath. He knew he had a visitor. He heard a faint scratching noise. The
visitor was so close, perhaps across him. Another faint scratch came from the
next room. He continued to close his eyes and feel the presence of this
peculiar visitor. Suddenly, footsteps echoed in the next room as it wanted to
him to follow. The footsteps continued as he could hear it inside the very room
he stayed. Lucian kept calm and didn't bother.
The
window in front of him suddenly shuts down. Footsteps coming in from the other
room grew louder as it headed out of the Lucian's room and into the next room.
This interrupted Lucian with his thinking. He finally stood up, fixed his
crimson tie, the collar of his white long sleeve shirt. He pulled out his
pocket watch from his black vest to check the time, 1:01 AM, the witching hour
it read. The walking became louder as Lucian gave a sigh, held his watch on one
hand and moved to the next room.
It was
empty.
He turned
around and decided to walk back into his room. Loud scratches suddenly came
from the door as Lucian knew; his visitor was leading him further. As he went
to the main room's door, the scratching grew louder and louder as if there was
someone wanting to claw its way in. Clearly from the door's cloudy window pane,
there's not a soul in sight and yet the scratching and clawing continued.
Lucian paid no attention to the noise and reached for the door knob as the
scratching suddenly stopped. He opened the door slowly. No one was there.
Lucian pulled his head out and looked at both ways, he found no one. An
envelope hit his foot as he looked down and found it with his name written on
top. He bowed down to pick it up, as behind him, a woman in an old bridal gown,
stood a few lengths behind him inside the room. She was wore a stained,
tattered and damaged gown, as she reached out to Lucian. She had a pale face,
and her completely black eyes stared at Lucian as she tried to scream and call
out to him. Lucian took the letter and went back inside, closing the door. No
one was inside when Lucian turned around. He went back to his chair, sat down
and placed the envelope on the middle of his desk and put his arms on the
table, his head resting on his hands as he looked at the letter. It was an
invitation. Lucian took the letter and opened the envelope and found a piece of
paper with an address, hand-written finely.
"I
guess we're spending the weekend there," he uttered. A faint smile
appeared on Lucian's face as the ghostly bride floated above his shoulder,
looking at the paper on his hand. Lucian turned his head to his right to face
her but no one was there. Lucian chuckled, and leaned once again on his comfy chair;
he lifted his feet and placed them on his fine oak office table again as the
cold wind rushed in from the open window across his room. "Santa Claus is
coming to town," Lucian hummed to the tune as he placed his hands together
above his stomach and calmly closed his eyes. The dark sky continued to cover
the night, and the Christmas carols played outside while Lucian fell sound
asleep with a smile on his face.
Morning
came fast and it was already 9 AM. A scrawny young man with corn colored locks
has tucked down on the computer and continued with his daily chore. His thick
framed glasses reflected the report he was working on. On his desk, his name
etched on a small wood plaque, Karl. On another room, a dainty woman,
fashioning a maid like dress, continued to hum to a familiar Christmas tune as
she prepared coffee and tea for her employer and colleague. White makeup, long
and dark eyelashes, and red lips, black curly hair, black nail polish, this was
her fashion statement and somehow no one bother to ask. She poured hot water
onto two cups, placed a tea bag on each cup and prepared a small cup of coffee.
She lifted the small tray, carrying her well prepared snack as she goes back to
the main room humming. The silver haired benefactor continued to ponder in his
office. Lucian was still gazing outside with the letter on top of his desk.
Diane came in with tray on both hands, drops the tea on Lucian's desk and
leaves. She goes back to the main room, drops the coffee on Karl's desk who
smiled at least at Diane's effort. She goes back to the pantry and continued
her own set of chores. Tons of paper work to be done and still, Lucian is out,
his mind still wandering about. Karl, a little unhappy with the paperwork,
could only continue to work on the documents that had been addressed to their
office. A soft knock suddenly stalls his busy body as he looked around with no
one else willing to open the door. Karl reluctantly went to the door to see who
it was. A tall figure can be made out behind the cloudy window pane as Karl
opens the door.
"Is
this Detective Lucian Ferral's office?" A tall British man, carrying a
small leather suitcase and cane, inquired. Karl, looking at the man from head
to foot, could only guess that this man is not here to sell any goods. The man
wore a fine black suit together with a fedora hat and a finely tied bow tie
around his neck. The man gave a sophisticated appearance as he carried himself
tall and elegant. The man suddenly coughs, "It is not polite to stare
young man." The tall lean man informed Karl with his husky tone as Karl
offered him to enter the small office. "I'm looking for Detective Ferral.
Is he around?" the man continued to ask. Diane came out of the small
pantry to see that they have company.
"Oh
my, I didn't expect us to have a guest early this morning," She softly
spoke with her cute dainty voice. The man took off his hat and bowed at the
lady. Diane returned with a bow of her own. "Would you like some
tea?"
"I
would be delighted but my apologies madam, I am looking for Detective Lucian
Ferral," the man calmly rejected the offer.
Diane
smiled, "Please follow me." She led the guest to Lucian's office that
was just across as the detective was still staring outside with no signs of
returning to ground. "Lucian, we have..." Lucian raised a finger,
halting Diane before she can continue and offered a chair to their guest while
continuing his stare outside. Lucian turned his head to the man, who sat onto
the chair he offered.
"What
can I do for you?"
The man
pulled out from his leather bag a folder with a bunch of printed documents
filed inside. He was about to place it on the table when the man noticed the
piece of paper on top the table.
"An
invitation?" The guest inquired as Lucian smiled and offered to take the
file instead of placing it on the table. "May I ask if this was sent by
someone in particular?" Lucian kept the smile on his face as he opened the
folder and breezed through the file. A picture of a lovely mansion was in the
middle of the folder as he took it out and placed it on the table. Another
picture of a lovely couple and two women were also found on the folder.
"My employer wishes to hire you."
"What
for? Your employer seemed to know more than I do judging from this record you
just handed to me," Lucian returned with a question to their guest.
"You
see, my employer, Mr. Raymond Ashter would like to procure that house you are
looking at, but apparently we have... gone into a small problem," the man
uttered with a deep emphasis on their problem. "We had made bids to this
house and land but all of a sudden, we received word that the owner suddenly
declined. We didn't hear any word from the owner and started to worry. Well, my
employer started to worry. We then receive news that some of the bidders and a
few more people were invited to spend a night at the mansion as guests,"
Lucian knew where this is leading; "I assumed that the invitation was also
sent to you by the owner." Pointing out the letter on the table as Lucian
found the same envelope inside. "Mr. Ashter is a busy man could not
accommodate the request of a personal visit. He is worried that only invited
and present guests are allowed to make bids on the mansion and land. He would
like to request for you to visit and bid on his behalf. He would be glad to pay
for your travel and services if you are... willing to accept, that is."
"It'd
be nice to go on a vacation!" Lucian shouted. "Isn't it?" He
knew there were ears listening to their conversation as Karl and Diane went
back to their work, seeing Lucian was onto them. "What do we need to
do?" Lucian asked as he faced the man with a cold smile.